Friday, 15 May 2015


On a cloudy night the lake was gently lapping against the bank. In a small clearing in a wood a small boy called Jimmy was roasting marshmallows. A monster swam with stealth up out of the lake and crept up behind Jimmy. Jimmy turned around and saw the monster! It had shiny yellow eyes and green scales.

 Trying to defend himself Jimmy held out his marshmallow on a stick. Instantly the monster transformed into acting like a dog. He shot out his tongue and gobbled up the first marshmallow! The monster stood on his tail and did a ballet twirl and rolled over to get the second marshmallow. Jimmy pulled the third and last marshmallow out of the bag and the monster ate it out of his hand.

”Oh no” Jimmy thought as he cautiously held out his hand with the last marshmallow out in it. The monster ate the last marshmallow, slurping it out of Jimmy’s hand. The crocodile like monster waited expectedly for another marshmallow and then it realized that there was no more. The monster reverted back into a vicious man eating monster! Jimmy instantly turned and ran but stumbled and fell. Crawling towards his tent and Jimmy grabbed a pillow. He used it like a shield. Happily the monster grinned. Jimmy threw the pillow away then ran away. The monster tried to roast the pillow then it incinerated.

1 comment:

  1. You have done a great job with this Justice. You have really captured the movie well through using some great vocabulary and complex sentences. Well done.