Monday 9 January 2017

Poem



ENGLAND

I went into the lobby
Happiness was everywhere
Excitement flowed through my veins
I left the port of air into the outside
Everything looked different
Nervousness quickly arrived in my stomach
like a plane coming to land

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  1. Unknown9:16 am, January 10, 2017

    Hi Justice!

    I really liked your use of simile at the end, is made it very visual. The parts where you explain how it feels also bring an element of realness to the poem. You are a good writer, I hope you continue to develop this skill of yours.

    Mark

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