Monday, 23 March 2015
Yesterday the year 4's went to Motat on old school bus,to learn about exciting inventions. Eventually I got a chance to explore the mirror maze. When I strolled through the pump house I got a piece of black coal. In the village prison cell there was a very very very freaky man, he looked dead and he was staring at me. The earthquake cafe.
Criteria for an Effective Paragraph
⚈ Start with a topic sentence.
⚈ Have at least 2-3 connected sentences.
⚈ Have sentences that are effective that
b. have juicy vocab e.g action/describing words
(c) grammatically correct
(d) punctuated correctly.
(Think of 1 or 2 things that you need to to focus on next time, to make sure your paragraphs are effective.)
Next time I need to ….