Thursday, 23 February 2017

What's a Kakapo Advice blog

Walt: make connections across multiple texts.

Task description: this is an advice blog.

Wednesday, 22 February 2017

The Race

WALT: To wright a fecunt
Have you  had a race before? Well Mr Goodwin made us race today, It was boring. ……

First we put aware chrome books on a table. Then we lined up and put aware shoes on, after that we wracked to the field. I was the most boring thing I did.

Now Mr Goodwin told us the instructions. The instructions were to run to the goalpost and buck then sit down. I thot it was a sick joke (blaaaaaaaaaaaaarg) . I was going to sit on this crack that was in the ground to my bum did not get wet.

We ran it was suuuuper boring. I ran as fast as I could the Deavay was right beside me then I passed him, I got to the post then turned around I when I got back I was exhausted.

Finale we got a drink it was the best. It felt like I had a father fall in my mouth. The we went back to class. It was actually fun. but I will never do that a gen.

Task description: To wight a recount of us rung in on the filed. Then we came in to the class and did some work. it was boring.

Tuesday, 14 February 2017

Newspaper Towers

Walt: write a recount about our experience

Have you made a skyscraper out of newspaper? Well today my class did that very thing. It was so fun.You should try it.


Mr goodwin said the instructions then I started to get ideas down instantly. Me and my friend planned and got some ideas, then we got called out. When we were told to get into groups of 5-7 my friends and me were in the same group. The group was me, Deavay, Awathan, hopa and lepa,. I was very excited.


Deavay was the drawer and I think personally that I gave the most info. Mr goodwin gave us a pees of paper to wit what you thot. I thot that we should have a tower that had sheets of paper sticking out of the sids, Deavay thought that it should be a tower that was like a toob. We went with Deavay’s idea. It was better.


We built a tower that was a  big toob that had supports. World up newspaper into long thin pipe and stack them together, if it was leaning we would fix it.The tower was 1.12m tall and 0.3m long. I had lots of fun, and I got deter at building and teamwork.


I learnt that you can build a tower out of newspaper. That teamwork  is the best work. My team won and Chas’s group came 2nd and Daisy’s group came 3rd. and I would do nothing differently.


Task description: this is a recount of newspaper towers.

Thursday, 9 February 2017

Chicken Flavoured Worms

WALT: write quality introductions.


have you ever had chicken flavored worms? My teacher must have a scruloose, because he feed us chicken flavored worms. I wasn't expecting that.
Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Tack description: Today room seven did a intro to chicken flavoured warms. I got to mark my self so if you think that I got sum thing else peels  me. the warms are noodles.  we did all the sentences separately.


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Wednesday, 8 February 2017

Te Taiao o Tamaki

I think that trees are important to Tamaki because they make oxygen for us to breath. They prevent landslides because  there roots stick the ground together. And they look good so they keep peoples moral up.

Native trees to NZ

Walt: make connections across multiple texts.

Friday, 3 February 2017

My gruop

Walt: follow instructions and present work to a high standard.

Task description: In this task we learnt some things about an iMac.