Thursday, 9 February 2017

Chicken Flavoured Worms

WALT: write quality introductions.


have you ever had chicken flavored worms? My teacher must have a scruloose, because he feed us chicken flavored worms. I wasn't expecting that.
Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Tack description: Today room seven did a intro to chicken flavoured warms. I got to mark my self so if you think that I got sum thing else peels  me. the warms are noodles.  we did all the sentences separately.


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2 comments:

  1. Hi Justice,

    I have NEVER had chicken flavoured worms! I have eaten crocodile steaks and wallaby tail though. It is great to draw people's attention to what you want to tell them with a question. The chips look like worms in the picture - yuck.

    Learning about persuasive writing is a great skill and can help you get a job when you grow up as you can convince people that you are the best!

    XX Mumma

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    1. the chips are not chips there worms.

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