Monday, 9 January 2017



I went into the lobby
Happiness was everywhere
Excitement flowed through my veins
I left the port of air into the outside
Everything looked different
Nervousness quickly arrived in my stomach
like a plane coming to land

1 comment:

  1. Hi Justice!

    I really liked your use of simile at the end, is made it very visual. The parts where you explain how it feels also bring an element of realness to the poem. You are a good writer, I hope you continue to develop this skill of yours.